I asked some people what they thought about the three pieces that i have so far and here is what they said:
-the three dont really work very well as a series. the two horizontal could be a series. or the two with line.
-maybe if i focused just on the drawing that would be better, the line drawing is more unique.
-the vertical piece works very well. the symmetry is nice.
-liked the shaping and contour made in the vertical piece.
-maybe use line in the collage to make it work more with the other two.
if anyone else has any further suggestions feel free to add…
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